As you wanted me to tell you what I think, I will do so:
- I am not emotionally invested in the story so far because I don't really know how it began. 2-3 slides about your time at Lille would've been fantastic. If you want me to assume we are just starting out in Munich, no harm done. Forget the first point.
- You could post who you think your major players for the French World Cup campaign would be and monitor their progress throughout the tournament. (For example: Nasri still goalless - I would hate to drop him but he is just not up to the mark).
- Screenshots: I haven't seen a lot of Sakho and would love to see what his stats are like. I could easily go to FM and check him out, but you could inform the lazy readers (like myself) by posting a screenshot.
Of course, I'm sure your story will get detailed when you go back to club football, so I will be reading.
- I am not emotionally invested in the story so far because I don't really know how it began. 2-3 slides about your time at Lille would've been fantastic. If you want me to assume we are just starting out in Munich, no harm done. Forget the first point.
- You could post who you think your major players for the French World Cup campaign would be and monitor their progress throughout the tournament. (For example: Nasri still goalless - I would hate to drop him but he is just not up to the mark).
- Screenshots: I haven't seen a lot of Sakho and would love to see what his stats are like. I could easily go to FM and check him out, but you could inform the lazy readers (like myself) by posting a screenshot.
Of course, I'm sure your story will get detailed when you go back to club football, so I will be reading.
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