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The Eagles Enlightenment

Started on 11 November 2013 by sTedDarzZ
Latest Reply on 20 November 2013 by sTedDarzZ
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sTedDarzZ's avatar Group sTedDarzZ
11 yearsEdited
I watched the rain hit the window, listened to the unrythmical rhythm of its sound as it tapped the thin layer of glass, the only thing that protected me from the soulless cold of the rain. Cars drove passed my window, each more extravagant and expensive than the last, I watched, there was no jealous edge to my stare. Crowds floated past the window, each a caricature of society. The jocks, rolled by, their faces a shroud of humour, smiles set hard as stone, unrelenting and hypnotic. The jocks marched on through, chests puffed, strutting passed my window like cockerels on hot coals. And the girls; so many girls, their eyes darting around childishly, shrieking in surprise at the splendour of the flowers or the wonder of the stars. Innocent to the core by any eye, but mine.

The phone rang behind me, its shrill tones penetrating through the soft pitter patter of the rain, offending my ears, piercing my brain like a needle that had been held over a hot flame.

"Hello?" I recognised the gruff, voice of Ian Holloway in an instant, his West Country accent amuses me to this day. It had been some years since he had called me like this.
"Ian?!" I asked, knowing the answer.
"Mr Stedman, it has been too long, too long."
"It has, so what have you done this time Holloway?"
"Nothing, yet...say what are you doing with yourself these days?" My old friend asked, I could tell he was leading somewhere...
"Not a lot." I replied, trying to hide my disappointment.
"Then I present to you an interesting career opportunity, do you want my job?"

A nice start. Is there a particular reason all text was in bold? And you may want to look at the images. Hollway is very small, whereas the dots are much bigger. Nevertheless, a decent start, will keep an eye out for progress for sure!
think I will also follow.. as a fellow 1st time story writer would love to see how yours goes! :)
True about the picture, was in a bit of a rush to finish, prefer the new picture tbh, thanks for the comments guys
Just call him, Ian said. Tell him I sent you, Ian said. Tell him you're the one, Ian said. Not convinced. I resolved this would be the last time I helped my unlikely friend Mr Ian Holloway, dialled: 0...1...3...0...5...7...6...4...4...6...8...

"Hello...? Do you know what time it is?!" I didn't.
"Of course, what kind of a man doesn't where a watch?" The type of man who is friends with Ian Holloway.
"Well then, you're very..."
"Johnny?"
An American, female voice called, from a distance...
"I'll be back in a minute...err..."
"Is this not Steve Parish?"
I asked.
"Yes, yes it is...who is this?"
"Your wife just called you Johnny.?"
I stabbed.
"My wife?!" Laughed Steve, realising the situation I felt my stomach knot.
"Oh, erm, sorry to call you at such an...intimate time. I'll be going now."
"Tell me your name."
Steve said bluntly, I felt compelled to put the phone down, I resisted.
"This is Mr Stedman, Ian told me to call..."
"Oh yes, so glad to have you on board at Palace!"
"Have me on..."
Ian!
sTedDarzZ's avatar Group sTedDarzZ
11 yearsEdited
The lads greeted me warmly on my first day, their loyalty lay still with Ian but as his friend and heir, I felt accepted and at home. That first training session we just talked, about Ian, about the season, about tactics, about Luis Suarez's antics, would he stay or would he go? Liverpool away, the first game of the season, stood ominously on the horizon.
I had faith in my ability, and in my tactics, I just hoped that the lads would take to it:

Pre-Season, the melting pot of football, the transfer mill, the fitness training, the new boss. I love it. I consider myself a bit of a wheeler dealer if I'm honest, the shoe string budget of £4.6 million worried me not, I knew from countless hours on Football Manager as a boy, that one thing a team needed to survive in a new division, was goals. I waded into the transfer market, like a farmer to harvest, hoping it would reap reward.

Adam Le Fondre is the perfect fit for Crystal Palace, the goalscorer I knew I'd be needing, a born one, £4.6 million is pittance to the City's and the Chelsea's but to Palace it's a seasons budget, he had to deliver.

Samba Diakite a combative midfielder from QPR who prefers attrition to nullify the opposition. He would provide the physical edge to my Palace team.

The one notable exit from Selhurst Park, was captain Mile Jedinak. Interest in him with high and with other players of a similar mould in the squad, Diakite, Geudiora, Dikgacoi, I felt he was expendable.

For £3.5 million, the kitty got a much needed top up, I now had all I needed to patch up the squad.

With transfer dealings done, pre-season friendlies rolled round with all the excitement and fervour of a party at Gatsby's. There were ups and downs, but by the end I felt we were ready to face the challenges of the season.

The friendlies presented their challenges, they were a learning curve for me, I hope the lads felt we made the progress I did, the season approached with excitement at Selhurst hitting fever pitch.
I liked that update! Try using bigger and clearer pictures though :)
sTedDarzZ's avatar Group sTedDarzZ
11 yearsEdited
10 GAMES DOWN
Autumn. The season of noise, the noise of leaves underfoot, the noise of a pot bubbling on the stove, the noise of coat zips pulled up, the noise of football fans lining the terraces. The season, the smell of the stadium, the smell of burger and chips, intermingling with the rusty smoke of a cigarette, being smoked in the corner. Simple men, hopping from foot to foot, doing what they can to keep warm, and the match, the spectacle. Is there a better time of year?

The train of our season, set off on a difficult route, from game 1 there were metaphoric leaves clogging the railway. Liverpool away, our first challenge.

A draw that felt like a win. The squad and I piled back on to our coach in a buoyant, triumphant mood. We left the North-West on cloud nine.

Another stern test faced us next, buoyed from our draw away at Liverpool, we face Spurs with no fear.

We should have, Tottenham dropped us back down to Earth with a bang.
After our disappointing show against Tottenham, I really wanted to set things straight in the league, but first we had to manoeuvre a tricky away tie to Middlesbrough in the Capital One Cup.

Efficient, not spectacular, we looked like winning from the first whistle to the last, however I would have liked to have won by a bigger margin.
Our next opponent posed a slightly smaller threat than the Liverpool's or Tottenham's, if we were going to stay up, these were the games we had to win.

The boys pulled the rabbit out of the hat, we had to win and we did, a feeling which is deeply satisfying.
Another very winnable game faced us next the teams in and around you are the most important ones to beat, could we muster a second win on the bounce?

They say consistency is key, someone tell my squad that, if we could put on a string of performances of the calibre I know we can, we'd be fine, looking up, not down, but we cannot find any consistency.
Swansea stood in our way in another tight, winnable affair, I harboured hopes of 3 points.

I hoped for 3, I got 1. We fought hard for our draw, and in the end a point pleased me.
Again, a game we needed to win faced us in the shape of Norwich.

A loss that really choked me, we need to win games like that and the loss hurt me.
Could we get back on the horse? I knew we needed a performance against West Brom, or else risking a run of bad form.

The performance was not spectacular, Elliot Grandin's 89' equaliser, may prove crucial in the long run.
I hoped for another win, at home to Sunderland, we had an opportunity to get a run of form going.

Yet again, consecutive wins eluded us, we have to find the formula for consistency, else risk the drop.
The 3rd round of the Capital One Cup, posed another opportunity for us to test our metal, Tottenham again.

We fell short against Spurs, again. Disappointing, but not unexpected.

After the first 10 games of our season, we sit 2 points above the relegation zone, a perilous position, but a defensible one.

Star performers thus far, shape up in the faces of Dean Moxey and Elliot Grandin. Moxey has the consistency that the tea does not, a leader has emerged in him.

In fact, he has the highest average rating in the Premier League.
Whereas, Elliot Grandin, profited from the injury to Jon Williams, to help the team with 3 assists.


And so, to the next 10, my Eagle's team began to take shape, but could we stave off the drop? Would we survive? Would we ever find the key to consistency?
sTedDarzZ's avatar Group sTedDarzZ
11 yearsEdited

A knock on the door pierced through the sinister mask of the night. The house, reverberated, moaning at being disturbed from it's gentle slumber. I rose, shuffled blindly through the darkness and tapped the wall with my fingers, feeling for the light switch, the night veiling my vision, I felt like a volunteer in an unfortunate magicians trick. I opened the door, to find a man, who I would have placed at around 90, posing as Ian Holloway.

"Ian?!" I poorly attempted to hide my surprise, annoyance and pity. For Ian had lost weight, a lot of it. his eyes had sunk deep into his face and his cheekbones were pronounced, protruding out of his face, the skin hanging from them, like a poorly erected tent. I noticed bruising on his hands, the kind of deep red bruise that I am sure is what led scientists to conclude that bruises are bleeding under the skin. I could really believe that, looking at Ian. His voice, however husk and rough it had become was tell tale, the accent unmistakeable. A lot had changed in Ian's life in the short few months since he left Palace, clearly.
"Ian, what has happened to you?" I quizzed him, knowing I'd get little out of him, this was his way, he kept himself to himself did Ian, but something was wrong.
"What, this?" He said, holding out his hand. "Slipped in the garden, its nothing."
It wasn't, I decided to leave it, just a bruise I thought.
"Just tell Kim, I'm ok, I love her, and I'll see her soon."
"Tell her yourself mate, now what are you doing here at this time? Night out?"
"And tell her, I want her to bring the kids and move in with you for a while, oh and tell her to tell no one where she's going."
"Mate?"
Ian turned and walked away, the gravel crunching under his shoes, he got in his car and drove out into the night. Another favour for Mr Holloway!
Is he like a serial killer or something?
wait and see ;)

20 GAME UPDATE
Having started the season positive, not ground-breaking, but positive manner, the dressing room was full of banter and determination, everyone involved at the club wanted to push on. Even the cleaner, John, who greeted me every morning. Our next opponents, were visitors from 'The Bridge'; Chelsea.

We took a hard fought point off the Blues at Selhurst Park, I was pleased with the point, any point from Chelsea is a good point. An own goal by John Terry to hand it to us, made it even sweeter.
Following Chelsea we faced another stern test in the form of The Champions, Manchester United.

This time we succumbed. Quality is quality, on some days there is nothing left to do but to accept that you were beaten by a better team.
With just 1 point from our last 2 games, albeit against United and Chelsea, we needed to get back on the horse against an Everton side still adjusting to life under Roberto Martinez.

A brace from Adam Le Fondre helped us on our way to 3 points and a 3-2 victory, a much needed win.
Hull City presented us an opportunity not to be missed, a realistic chance of two wins on the bounce and perhaps, at last, some consistency.

An opportunity we grabbed with both hands, the boys really took the initiative. I hoped that we could use this as a cornerstone for future success.
Next up, a firmer test than Everton, or Hull: Arsenal.

My lads stepped up their game and raised themselves to the level of the opposition, snatching a point from an ever growing Arsenal side.
Southampton as our next opponent gave me hope that we could make it 4 unbeaten and really kick into our stride this season.

However, that is not how it panned out. I was disappointed with both the performance and the result against Southampton. Food for thought.
Bounce-back-ability. Ours was about to be tested, Stoke would be our judges.

A draw is not a win. A draw is not a loss. A draw is a draw. We could have won, we could have lost, I was satisfied.
Next in our path to survival, were fellow strugglers, Aston Villa.

A big win, off the back of a loss and a draw, we could have slipped into a poor run, but the boys responded and took all 3 points.
Once again, we faced one of the big sharks in our little pond. Table topping Manchester City.

We lost to the league leaders, no disgrace, but no points either.
Having lost to City I hoped that Newcastle would fall prey to the character of my squad. I was confident ahead of the game.

Fuming. And I let everyone know it, the squad, the press, my dog. For the first time as Palace manager, I was embarrassed.
The past 10 games left us sitting, 13th, not assured, but comfortable. We were 5 points above the drop zone, survival was looking ever more likely.

As the winter winds littered London with lonely hearts, Christmas past and January approached. The whirlwind madness of the transfer window approached, life at Palace was contempt, optimistic and harmonious...
You're doing fantastic with Crystal Palace mate, 13th place is a brilliant achievement for a club that cherishes 1 point in real life. :)
haha, too true!
Kim, Eva and Chloe, Will and Harriet, shuffled up my driveway a few days later, in silence. They fought there way through the thick carpeting of snow that hid truth from the eyes of men. I singed 'Hello!' to the younger 3, one of the only words hours of online studying had taught me, for Eva, Chloe and Harriet were almost completely deaf. I thought back to how strong Ian had been when Kim had cancer, and when the twins were born deaf. I realised something big must have happened, to cause this kind of reaction. I showed Ian's 'high school love' and now wife, Kim to her room and walked the kids to theirs. My house just had room for us all, Kim would have my bedroom, the 3 girls would share, William and I, would take the sofas. After all, it was only going to be for a short while. My phone vibrated. A picture message:

Ollie? Who was Ollie? The house moaned in the scratching wind. Goosebumps. The picture message came through again, again. 5 times in the next 2 minutes. Then once an hour for the next 24 hours. The last time the message came through, the font was red. We Have Ollie. I racked my brains for an Ollie, somewhere in my life. Who was Ollie.
A few days after the final message came through, I found my old school yearbook. I flicked through the pages, worn out and tired, I felt there was no hope. I didn't go to school with any 'Ollie's', but I couldn't think of any where else to look. I was resigned to defeat, when I found this...

Memory, mine hadn't helped me! Now I realised, I remembered, to the whole of Bristol Grammar for Boys, my best friend Ian, was known as 'Ollie'. And they, had, Ollie...
Whoever they were.
My phone rang, I answered it with trembling hands...

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