Paris FC 2000 Challenge to overtake the big money giant PSG!

My friend who live in Paris (recently moved due to his father having a new job, not sure what) has asked me to come over and visit him so the following week I got on the euro star and arrived in Paris! I was amazed on how big the city is! There is something that you guys don’t know about me but I let you wait for that news later on.......... So after a few hours of finding my friend house in Paris, he just brought me straight to his father. His father is Pierre Ferracci, he was a strange man because in England I didn’t see him much and my friend Lucas never talked about him, so Pierre was sitting down on this black leather chair and looked up and said to me "Bonjour William I have heard many good things about you, Have you heard of a football club called Paris FC 2000?" I was instantly confused about him bringing this subject up, he didn't even ask how I was? I thought that was abit rude! So I said " well no sir I have not heard of them before, may I ask where you are going with this? Pierre did not look impress but I didn’t know what was going on? He said "well I want you to go away and look up about them and come back to me in 30 minute” So I went away looking confused but still did the research but it was a stupid research because I looked it up on Wikipedia and who does that sort of research?! I went back into the room and he said “Right William, I will ask you 3 questions and if you get all 3 right I have a very important question to ask you okay?” I was standing nervously with sweat on the palm of my hand and replied yes in a trembling voice.

“Here we go then, 1) when was Paris FC 2000 founded? “1969
2) What is the capacity of their football stadium? “2,500”
3) What league is Paris FC in? “National League”
Pierre looked up to me then smiled and went straight to the question, “Monsieur how would you feel of taking the manager role of Paris FC 2000?” I was shocked and managed to stay calm and replied back “well sir that would be a marvelous opportunity but there is one thing that is bugging me, (get ready for this readers)………………………………………… as you know I am deaf in both ears and struggle to hear well, this can affect the team and the media will be all over me! “ Pierre said “well I know that you are deaf but you have got all of the coaching qualification in England and you are so confident and this will give the club a massive reputation as the world will be shocked to see a deaf manager and players will love to be a part of that! Also I reckon you got what it takes to beat PSG!”
So I instantly replied “Sir it is an honor to take up this job offer and I can’t wait to get started!.

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So i am sitting in my office with an incredible view of the Effiel tower and lots of small shops but something did not feel right. I could not communicate to some of the staff due to not speaking english so i decided to release my assistant manager, Head of Youth Development and chief scout. No worries readers i have bought in some new staffs that i can communicate but also an absolute delight to work with. The first man who is my new assistant manager, he is very well known in England but also in the world due to having a great career at Manchester United and Newcastle United, we have Mr Andrew Cole who i believed who will help me bring glory for Paris FC. For the chief scout i have bought in Alan Crawford who have previously worked for Nottingham Forest as a coach but got a good knowledge to checking the ability of the players. And for the Head of Youth Development we have Alan McLeary who have worked for Millwall and Gillingham as a chief scout and under 19 coach! I am glad to bring them in as this make me feel much more happier with the work enviroment and also to mixed it up.

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