Adrian, I've edited your posts to make pictures work in thumbnail to full size fashion. Use 'Edit' to have a look at how that bbcode works.
In regards to the story, I find it too compact at the moment. I'd like to see some more details, perhaps in month by month style. And most importantly I believe it's missing a personality touch, meaning that I'd want to read your opinion about various aspects of the game (e.g. tactics, negotiations, team management, etc).
In regards to the story, I find it too compact at the moment. I'd like to see some more details, perhaps in month by month style. And most importantly I believe it's missing a personality touch, meaning that I'd want to read your opinion about various aspects of the game (e.g. tactics, negotiations, team management, etc).