The Lads Up North

Rookie manager Keith Kennethson, former Slough Town player takes the hot seat at Blue Square North side Harrogate Town in an attempt of a successful reign at the North Yorkshire club, can he handle the pressure?

A bit of advice, take it or leave it but I would personally make sure that my first post, on a brand new story, that I hope to have success with, was an attention grabber. It needs to really set the scene for the story by using a mix of text and images, even possibly video. This isn't really an attention grabber for all the right reasons, it is lacking that "this story is going to be interesting" appeal.

Please don't take these comments as insults but instead take them as constructive criticism.