PLEASE COMMENT ON STORY AND GET THE VIEWS HIGH!
That's not the best thing to write on your story. Stories aren't about getting high views, they're about having fun writing, and having fun reading others, not just getting high views. Also, with high views, comes a good story. And a good story uses detail, intrigues the reader, gets them involved. Your opening didn't intrigue the reader and suggest something that could happen, so to get the views, try to extend your opening and other posts if you do want high views. Also, it takes time to get views. Nevertheless, good luck with this.
