my man united story

yeah i was posting but every few minutes i would gte disconected

my champions league group

http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/EuropeanChampionsCup_OverviewStages_zps5cd184bc.png

http://www.fmscout.com/q-7589-FM-Story-Writing-Guide.html <--- Try that out bud, if you find a way you like to put it and a way we like to see it then do it. For instance, your last post...

'another great win this time a 4-1 win over wigan with rooney scoring 2 valencia and a new signing both scoring 1 and rooney got injured'

You don't need nothing big, just a few capital letters, commas, title, fullstops ect would be a start. I'm hoping you take this as constructive as possible, because I'll read your story either way, but this would be ideal...

I 'four one' Think Manchester United have a solid season ahead of them.

Today at Old Trafford/DW Stadium Manchester United took on the Latics in what was clearly a one sided game. The 5 goal game split 4-1 tumbled in Manchester Uniteds favour. Wayne Rooney started off the scoring with a... ect ect ect...

However towards the end of the game, the English striker suffered a hefty injury and had to be brought off, ect ect,

Next in Red Devils Pre-Season friendlies they take on so and so, ect ect.

http://images.mediastorehouse.net/2/5929224_450_450_0_0_fit_6_88c9e4bb0aae95131df7706220987c18.jpg

I really hope you take this advice mate and put it into practice, as I said, I will read the story regardless, but try it and add a couple of pictures if possible, hope I helped:')

^You're a good man TCO.

Thank you! i will do that in the future

more updates later today

Transfers this season also if anyone thinks i cheated/used the editor i had to use monthly installments for most of the transfers but i think i got good deals expecialy with the gustavo deal and ashley young and nani both have 50 percent of next transfer clause


http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/ManUtd_TransfersHistory-2_zpsddbace3c.png

Also i cant decide what tactic to use.

This one
http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/ManchesterUnited_TacticsOverview-3_zpsb3c68a70.png

This one

http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/ManchesterUnited_TacticsOverview-6_zpsfd04d95a.png

Or this one

http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/ManchesterUnited_TacticsOverview-4_zps3c169d28.png

The last one is the one i have been using.

man united not there best despite victory

man united where not there best at old trafford only managing to pull off a 1-0 win over aston villa

new signing fellani opened the scoring with a towering header over ron vlaar to score a near post header from a valencia corner. His first goal for man united however villa fans may have something to worry about as star player charles n'zogbia was forced off with a first half injury

http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/ManUtdvAstonVilla_StatsMatchStats_zps9bc1f7cd.png

Looking better mate, the final piece of advice would be to use capital letters for names, other than that it looks much more appealing

Thank you!

You're improving definitely, but there are still a few problems you need to iron out. For instance, you need to start writing "I" in caps too, it looks much better that way. Also, try to make your posts a little more in depth; add some sense of story to this. Other than that, you're doing good, keep it up

Mate, Please use capitals on your titles, start of sentences etc it will just make your whole story look much better and more appealing.

Some good signings though!

Man united pay the penalty

Man united payed the penalty against Fulham. Fulham striker Petric opened the scoring with a fierce shot from just inside the penalty area then in the 72nd minute striker Rodrigo equalised for Man united but in the 85th minute Man united defender Vidic gave away a penalty for a foul on Berbatov and Riise had no problem scoring the penalty

In all honesty we deserved to lose as fulham played much better than us

http://i1292.photobucket.com/albums/b564/samloveday/FulhamvManUtd_StatsMatchStats_zpse9b2df8d.png

Looks like you took the advice mate, as Dean said its a lot more appealing, but yes, few capitalisations and it will be right, good luck, unlucky with the Fulham result

Yeah hope to get back to winning ways in the next match.