Debenham's Football Revolution - 1) Vital Vitesse

Vitesse sack Debenham

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A strange turn of events have happened in the last couple of days as on the Vitesse Football Club official website, it announced that Debenham's contract had been terminated with immediate effect. Vitesse fans all around the world are shocked with the events that have taken place and many angry letters and emal have been sent into the club to say how annoyed they are at this time when all the fans thought that he was doing an alright job.

Debenham, 25, joined Vitesse in mid July last year but has only lasted under eight months inside of the job following his termination.

Vitesse have made a full statement on Dutch television saying "Sadly, the board feels that Lloyd's side aren;t getting results that we won't and we don't want to leave it too late to get a new coach. We wish Lloyd all of the best for the future. That's all!"

Author's Notes

Right, I have come to the conclusion that this story is now over. I want to make a story that will be big. One people will all like and comment on because I need comments to help me develop as a writer. I hope you all do support me on my story because I have some really good ideas!

Why do you NEED!!!!!! comments??

2013-08-19 15:30#129386 FM-LD :

Author's Notes

Right, I have come to the conclusion that this story is now over. I want to make a story that will be big. One people will all like and comment on because I need comments to help me develop as a writer. I hope you all do support me on my story because I have some really good ideas!

At the end of the day, it's up to you if you want to continue this story or not, but it shouldn't be for lack of comments! I'm sure if you keep up the regular updates and continue to improve your posts you'll start seeing more comments on each update

But it's up to you as to what you want to do next.

2013-08-19 21:05#129389 Rablador : At the end of the day, it's up to you if you want to continue this story or not, but it shouldn't be for lack of comments! I'm sure if you keep up the regular updates and continue to improve your posts you'll start seeing more comments on each update

This ^

If you have read some of the earlier stories of the best writers on the site, heck, every writer on the site, you'll notice that a lot of them have times where they go 5-6 posts, maybe even more without any comments. But you've got to press on with it and eventually people will take notice and see the hard work you've put in and then the comments and praise will flow in on it's own.

People have been giving you stick for starting a story every three or four days and you have to admit that it's not completely undeserved. Read other stories, pick up tips from them and take a week off from writing. Get at least six months into your game and if you enjoy the save then start up a story for yourself. Matt(Wellsy) had a similar problem, and he was challenged to make a story that lasted after several failed attempts.

And he did. His Bayern Munich story hit 20k views not to long ago. Hopefully you can do the same.

I/We are not telling you just because we're getting a little annoyed - we want great stories on the site and we want you to improve too. Why do you think I wrote such a long message?

With that, I leave it to you to follow our advice or not.

2013-08-19 16:52#129420 Arvind :

2013-08-19 21:05#129389 Rablador : At the end of the day, it's up to you if you want to continue this story or not, but it shouldn't be for lack of comments! I'm sure if you keep up the regular updates and continue to improve your posts you'll start seeing more comments on each update

This ^

If you have read some of the earlier stories of the best writers on the site, heck, every writer on the site, you'll notice that a lot of them have times where they go 5-6 posts, maybe even more without any comments. But you've got to press on with it and eventually people will take notice and see the hard work you've put in and then the comments and praise will flow in on it's own.

Thank you for that compliment, Arvind

new story is here:
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