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Portsmouth FC - The Story

Started on 13 October 2013 by pompeyblue
Latest Reply on 22 October 2014 by Josh_MU
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Story Update

Hey guys,

There are a few things I would like to go over with you regarding this story so I guess you could call this a Story Update. As you may know, this story has gone on for quite a long time now. In fact, I have pretty much been writing this story since I first joined the site in October 2013.

Over this period I have had fantastic support from all of you FMScout members, and currently stand in at the time of writing with 55366 views and 821 replies. Not bad, for my first story. I have also managed a Story of the Month nomination, narrowly missing out to tbendis’s magnificent story, The Adriatic Adventure.

I am extremely grateful for all the support I have received however I feel recently many people are losing interest in the story and that can be seen in the lack of comments after updates. There are some exceptional stories around the site at the moment and now I feel like my story has become somewhat stale and boring for you, the readers.

So, what do I do next? Of course, I don’t want to end the story and plan to keep this for the entire course of FM14 unless I am hit with an error/problems on the save. But nonetheless I feel like something needs to be done. I need feedback from you.

What would you like to see in my story, to make it more interesting and improve it? What do you enjoy reading and what would you like to see me implement into my writing? I would much appreciate if you could leave some feedback.

As always thanks for everything, you guys are the best.

maybe if you switched to a personal style? I have not read regularly, I admit, but you now have my full backing. subscribing to this topic as we speak.
I'm really enjoying the storyline with Mr.Slater, adds more drama and excitement into the story! Other than that I'm thoroughly enjoying each update.
I'm being honest when I say I haven't followed your story as much as others but when you gain 55,000 views, you must be doing something right, so I'd keep what you're doing now. You made this awesome story so you do what you feel would make it better!
fzemdegs, Josh and Jack: Thanks for all the support lads, I really do appreciate comments like yours as they make me much more motivated to write this story.
Loved that update mate! Can't wait for more!
man....shit just got real! This story is so goooood! keep it up mate; can't wait to see how Mr Hull gets himself ahead of the game
Great update man, I want more.
Holy crap, this is really good O.O I don't know why I wasn't following before >.<
Nooooooooooooooo! D:
TaT: Thanks a lot for the words!

Josh: Cheers mate, I'm doing my best to get updates out :P

Arvind: Glad you like it!

Josh: Blame Mr. Slater.... so basically blame yourself :P
Well, they're the guys who chose Woy over Harry Redknapp, so this wasn't unexpected :P

Typical FA, bonkers as usual. :v

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