Portsmouth FC - The Story

2013-10-27 13:05#139743 AlexTHFC : Loving this so far - you have a natural talent for writing and the detail here is great. One tip though, is to try to work on the presentation - as the league preview looked rather strange imo. Other than that, looking good!

2013-10-28 18:29#139978 wellsy1498 : For your 1st story this is brilliant and keep it up

2013-10-28 18:37#139983 Liverpool5983 : Really good story so far

2013-10-28 19:14#139996 BayernAmerica : Doing great in all aspects.

2013-10-28 23:01#140082 BayernAmerica : Nice lead in the table!!http://www.dcuteamstore.com/assets/product_images/PAMFIBCJEICIDDLM.jpg

2013-10-28 18:20#139974 pompeyblue : Would anyone mind offering me advice to improve the story as I feel like hardly anybody is reading.
Thanks

2013-10-29 14:05#140167 kazza121 :
I am not much of a writer myself, but why don't you just consider taking screenshots of game's results instead of writing them ? It will make your job less hectic and will make the posts more attractive ! I am also writing my first story and would like if you checked it out !

2013-10-29 21:18#140230 wellsy1498 : You are doing so well. Keep up with the style and layout it is great