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Adnan Januzaj. The Prodigy.

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Started on 22 April 2014 by TCO / First Post
Latest Reply on 28 April 2014 by TCO / Last Post
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5 yearsEdited


Friday 22nd February 2040

I was cold, scared, alone. Everyone had gone, and I mean everyone. Scientist had tried to stop it, but it just wouldn't, it destroyed everything, my house, my village, my country, everything. I walked down the dust covered road into nothing but brown clouds, and no noise but the deep sound of my coughs, a few steps later I heard a thud, and jumped backwards, it was a small metal box that had fallen of some loose planks of wood, still intact, and still accessible. I opened it, and found what look liked a diary. I steadily brushed away the dust to reveal the name, 'Adnans Diary' it read. I covered the book with my torn sweatshirt, and ran over to a wooden shack that still remained, I sat down, and I opened the diary...

Good luck
Great start, some great language in there and I can't wait for the next update!
captainbrickarms: Thanks mate :)

Jack: Cheers pal, yeah I can't wait to write it!
Great start ! Good luck !
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5 yearsEdited


Sunday 19th May 2013, League Match vs West Bromwich Albion.

Dear Diary,

I thought today was the day. The day I'd play under Sir Alex Ferguson in his last game, and put on that number 44 shirt, and give a performance that would rock the footballing world. It wasn't that day. I waited, patiently, hoping that my name would get called out.
Adnan! Adnan! You're coming on! I imagined it being, but I never heard it. I just waited there, on the bench, watching the first substitution, then the second, and then, in the 83' minute, the third, and final substitution.

It's near enough heartbreaking knowing that you never got to play under a legend, and it makes it that little bit worse, when you know you were only inches away. However, a new season lies ahead, a new manager, and a new hope for me, can I do it? Can I make the cut? Only time will tell, anyway, roll on Awards Night...


Me and Marouane in training, he's helped me settle in well with the first team.
Oooh, this seems a great idea! Will be following!
I agree with Josh. Must've sucked for Januzaj not to play under SAF :/
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5 yearsEdited
bebero: Thanks man :D

Josh_MU: Cheers bud :)

Pauker: Yeah, I'd be pretty gutted knowing I had to play under Moyes and not SAF.
This is an interesting take, and i'm really enjoying your updates; great use of language etc :) Keep it up buddy! :)
This is a great premise for the story. I once had an idea to do something like this but couldn't pull it off. Well you can, amazing writing!!
I agree with the rest of the crowd. Some god writing and an interesting concept.
Keep it up.
Can't say that I like the guy (in fact, I hate him) but your writing has convinced me to follow ;)
Awesome start mate, I was a bit sad that it wasn't continued when you first wrote it in the other section of the site
TodayAtTomorrow: Thanks mate, hope I keep them interesting enough for you :P

BayernAmerica: You should give it a try, won't know if you don't try. Thanks bud :D

Northwood: Cheers man :)

LFC: How can you hate him? ;) I don't think it is my writing, just the fact actually you're Adnans secret admirer ;)

TylerK: Cheers mate :D Yeah it was moved to a place nobody goes so I just gave up really :P

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