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Adnan Januzaj. The Prodigy.

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TCO's avatar Group TCO 2014-04-22 18:30
gb 487 posts 30 likes joined Mar 20, 2013


Friday 22nd February 2040

I was cold, scared, alone. Everyone had gone, and I mean everyone. Scientist had tried to stop it, but it just wouldn't, it destroyed everything, my house, my village, my country, everything. I walked down the dust covered road into nothing but brown clouds, and no noise but the deep sound of my coughs, a few steps later I heard a thud, and jumped backwards, it was a small metal box that had fallen of some loose planks of wood, still intact, and still accessible. I opened it, and found what look liked a diary. I steadily brushed away the dust to reveal the name, 'Adnans Diary' it read. I covered the book with my torn sweatshirt, and ran over to a wooden shack that still remained, I sat down, and I opened the diary...

This post was edited by TCO (2014-04-22 22:25, 5 years ago)
captainbrickarms's avatar Group captainbrickarms 2014-04-22 19:09
gb 349 posts 62 likes joined Oct 03, 2013
Good luck
Once a Seagull, Always a Seagull
My Story:http://www.fmscout.com/q-12905-The-Future-Will-Be-Better-Tomorrow.html
Jack's avatar Group Jack 2014-04-22 19:12
gb 3455 posts 387 likes joined Mar 29, 2013
Great start, some great language in there and I can't wait for the next update!
TCO's avatar Group TCO 2014-04-22 19:45
gb 487 posts 30 likes joined Mar 20, 2013
captainbrickarms: Thanks mate :)

Jack: Cheers pal, yeah I can't wait to write it!
bebero's avatar Group bebero 2014-04-22 19:50
ro 678 posts 95 likes joined Jul 01, 2013
Great start ! Good luck !
TCO's avatar Group TCO 2014-04-22 22:16
gb 487 posts 30 likes joined Mar 20, 2013


Sunday 19th May 2013, League Match vs West Bromwich Albion.

Dear Diary,

I thought today was the day. The day I'd play under Sir Alex Ferguson in his last game, and put on that number 44 shirt, and give a performance that would rock the footballing world. It wasn't that day. I waited, patiently, hoping that my name would get called out.
Adnan! Adnan! You're coming on! I imagined it being, but I never heard it. I just waited there, on the bench, watching the first substitution, then the second, and then, in the 83' minute, the third, and final substitution.

It's near enough heartbreaking knowing that you never got to play under a legend, and it makes it that little bit worse, when you know you were only inches away. However, a new season lies ahead, a new manager, and a new hope for me, can I do it? Can I make the cut? Only time will tell, anyway, roll on Awards Night...


Me and Marouane in training, he's helped me settle in well with the first team.
This post was edited by TCO (2014-04-23 06:56, 5 years ago)
Josh_MU's avatar Group Josh_MU 2014-04-22 22:18
gb 2147 posts 250 likes joined Dec 08, 2013
Oooh, this seems a great idea! Will be following!
"As long as there are games to play it is not over." - Alex Ferguson

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Jer's avatar Group Jer 2014-04-23 01:35
yt 3609 posts 558 likes joined Dec 16, 2012
I agree with Josh. Must've sucked for Januzaj not to play under SAF :/
TCO's avatar Group TCO 2014-04-23 06:57
gb 487 posts 30 likes joined Mar 20, 2013
bebero: Thanks man :D

Josh_MU: Cheers bud :)

Pauker: Yeah, I'd be pretty gutted knowing I had to play under Moyes and not SAF.
This post was edited by TCO (2014-04-23 07:07, 5 years ago)
InvertedWingbacks's avatar Group InvertedWingbacks 2014-04-23 07:47
gb 1861 posts 156 likes joined Nov 09, 2013
This is an interesting take, and i'm really enjoying your updates; great use of language etc :) Keep it up buddy! :)
MJK46's avatar Group MJK46 2014-04-23 10:59
aq 3402 posts 325 likes joined Aug 27, 2013
This is a great premise for the story. I once had an idea to do something like this but couldn't pull it off. Well you can, amazing writing!!
Give my FM17 Story a read Paris FC: Une Ambition Capitale
Northwood's avatar Group Northwood 2014-04-23 12:50
dk 533 posts 62 likes joined Nov 28, 2012
I agree with the rest of the crowd. Some god writing and an interesting concept.
Keep it up.
LFC's avatar LFC 2014-04-23 14:34
00 1504 posts 125 likes joined Jul 19, 2013
Can't say that I like the guy (in fact, I hate him) but your writing has convinced me to follow ;)
TylerK's avatar Group TylerK 2014-04-23 14:34
gb 730 posts 55 likes joined Oct 09, 2013
Awesome start mate, I was a bit sad that it wasn't continued when you first wrote it in the other section of the site
TCO's avatar Group TCO 2014-04-23 17:25
gb 487 posts 30 likes joined Mar 20, 2013
TodayAtTomorrow: Thanks mate, hope I keep them interesting enough for you :P

BayernAmerica: You should give it a try, won't know if you don't try. Thanks bud :D

Northwood: Cheers man :)

LFC: How can you hate him? ;) I don't think it is my writing, just the fact actually you're Adnans secret admirer ;)

TylerK: Cheers mate :D Yeah it was moved to a place nobody goes so I just gave up really :P

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