Nice to see your first story attempt here, even though the story's title reminds me of the latest Smurfs
This story is definitely missing some pictures
, as in screenshots
of players, fixtures, matches, stats, your team... as well as other images
, like Man City's badge, special icon for when you write 'Man of the Match', etc. You don't have to upload all pictures on fmscout.com, you may use external ones in your posts too.
If you're feeling lost with the whole pictures thing, you might want to check out my FM Screenshots Tutorial
You could also benefit from some extra text formatting
. For example you could utilize:
- h3 or h4 headings,
- colors, italics, underline,
- lists (like this one)
Should make your posts reflect better what you have in mind.
Also very important, don't hesitate to share your thoughts
on the game, not just report back with match progress or transfers summary.