Nice start Rookie. Are we polling when you will be "retired" by Liverpool? ;-)
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2012-10-23 19:20#68316 Kiwi : Nice start Rookie. Are we polling when you will be "retired" by Liverpool? ;-)Retired? Never!
2012-10-24 20:22#68412 or.dabool : I like the story so far. Well written and making you want more. Plus, the music is awesome.Thanks I'm trying to do what all good story writers do by finishing each episode on a cliff-hanger. The music will only get better, that I can promise
2012-10-24 23:17#68429 mwichmann : You don't need a cliff hanger every chapter, IMO. Overuse of any technique dulls the effect.I didn't mean that I'd use cliff-hangers every post, just often enough for readers to be satisfied.
2012-10-25 21:10#68500 gamekiller2k12 : hey im irish too! i really like this story but im a gooner personally. i hope this goes well!Thanks man! I hope you enjoy this story!
You are reading "Walk On: My Life In Red".