Nice start Rookie. Are we polling when you will be "retired" by Liverpool? ;-)
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2012-10-23 19:20#68316 Kiwi : Nice start Rookie. Are we polling when you will be "retired" by Liverpool? ;-)Retired? Never!
2012-10-24 20:22#68412 or.dabool : I like the story so far. Well written and making you want more. Plus, the music is awesome.Thanks
2012-10-24 23:17#68429 mwichmann : You don't need a cliff hanger every chapter, IMO. Overuse of any technique dulls the effect.I didn't mean that I'd use cliff-hangers every post, just often enough for readers to be satisfied.
2012-10-25 21:10#68500 gamekiller2k12 : hey im irish too! i really like this story but im a gooner personally. i hope this goes well!Thanks man! I hope you enjoy this story!
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