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[FM13] Roma - Conquering Europe Once Again

My attempt to bring European success to AS Roma
Started on 21 July 2013 by Nathaniel
Latest Reply on 6 June 2014 by Jer
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Nathaniel's avatar Group Nathaniel
10 yearsEdited


The Shade 0-1 Neal Hasan




He walked into the restaurant, the delicate cutlery set out beautifully, a sweet aroma filling the room. He showed the restaurant staff his card and walked into the staff only area, where he was sure his guest awaited him. Tied up in a chair, there he was. Neal Hasan. AS Romas beloved owner who was pumping ludicrous amounts of money into the club, allowing the manager to sign young, disloyal players.

He had ordered the kidnapping of Hasan from his house. Had got a group from the Mafia to do it and they had been effective. They had even set up his Video Camera, ready to tape Hasan getting his brains blown out. He placed his balaclava over his head, Hasan had a gag on but he now removed it. He decided he wasn't going to speak. He was going to let Hasan panic.

"So you are the infamous Shade I'm guessing" said Hasan, in a calm manner.

This threw the Shade, he expected screaming and panicking but Neal was cool as a refrigerator at the North Pole. He's putting on an act he thought, trying to throw me. He went back to preparing the Video Camera, for the greatest show ever.

Outside the Italia Police converged on the building. Hasan had released the press statement as a mechanism to lure out "The Shade". They had watched as Hasan was kidnapped and dragged to this restaurant. They had waited until, they saw a shadowy figure with his hood up and head down enter the building, after hours. Now they surrounded it and closed in.

He had finished prepping the video camera and now was preparing the script that Neal was going to read before he died. He had it written and just needed to print it off. Then he heard the plate clatter. It took him a moment to realise what was going on but when he did he reacted expertly. He charged for the window and jumped through, he had left it open in case of an emergency like this. He landed on the tarmac and saw how stupid the Police, or whoever it was, had been. They had 2 men watching the back but neither of them were watching the alleyway. As soon as both were looking away he charged down the alley.

It had all been an elaborate trap. Hasan had lured him out with his treachery and the police had been waiting to pounce. They had tried to trick him. But nobody tricked "The Shade". He was too clever for them. However one thing was certain.

He would get revenge...
Should've killed that Neal Hasan when you had the chance. I hate his guts!

Brilliant writing, Nate. You are living proof of how great the stories on this site have gotten over the past year I have been here.
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2013-08-16 14:15#128408 Akash : Should've killed that Neal Hasan when you had the chance. I hate his guts!

Brilliant writing, Nate. You are living proof of how great the stories on this site have gotten over the past year I have been here.

Haha, I know was just to slow!! ;)

Thanks Akash! And yeah I dunno about mine but the quality of stories is definitely improving!
Nice try, Emma.
Very nice writing. I wonder what The Shade will do next? Or how many days Neal has to live? ;)
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Oh thank goodness. I am just too smart.
Excellent writing Nath! Neal, you better watch out because the Shade is coming for you :P
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HEH
Nathaniel's avatar Group Nathaniel
10 yearsEdited


Jolting January


Fabio reflected on what had been a simply awful month. Not just on the pitch but off it to. The Shade had been ever present in his terrorising of the club and had even attempted to kill Mr Hasan. However it was the on the pitch stuff that Fabio was more concerned about. 2 draws, 2 losses and only 1 win had left Fabio irritated to say the least. He was going to have a major overhaul, a complete change of tactic. However here is how the month unfolded...









I am really disappointed in the boys. A shocking month and I already have a new tactic planned! This tactic will shock the football world but I am confident, having used it in training a few times, that it will work.

This tactic will take Italy by Storm

*TACTIC TO BE REVEALED SOON*
Jesus! Catania slapped you up!
Ouch, some not so great results. :/ Don't worry though, the new tactic will propel you to victory :P
Nathaniel's avatar Group Nathaniel
10 yearsEdited

The Shade 1-1 Neal Hasan




He had watched on as Fabio's resistance had crumbled and was gleeful. He was in the mood for causing pain but he decided that there was no point in going after Cannavaro. He would go for Hasan. Tricky, manipulative, rich Hasan. He was in Switzerland now, some conference or something. He had taken his family with him along with his 12 man protection detail. But he hadn't taken his house. And The Shade knew where he lived. He got into his car and drove...

He arrived at the house, 30 minutes later. He got out his sledgehammer pocketed his gun. He knew there was a man watching the house but he also knew where he was located. He snuck up behind the hosue bodyguard and shot him, a fatal bullet to the top of his spine, killing him instantly. He picked his sledgehammer back up and walked towards the door.

First thing he did was raid Neal's fridge. He knew that Neal kept loads of Oreos in there so he quickly ransacked it and threw all the packets into his Backpack. He ran outside and emptied it into his car. He then walked back inside.

He used his lock pick to unlock it quickly and stepped inside. First thing he did was raid Neal's fridge. He knew that Neal kept loads of Oreos in there so he quickly ransacked it and threw all the packets into his Backpack. He ran outside and emptied it into his car. He then walked back inside.

He loved smashing up mansions. That was what he did best. He began, crashing his sledgehammer down on antique tables and on ludicrously expensive vases. He continued until he had finished downstairs. Next he walked up to the 2nd floor.

Hasan's bedroom was up here along with his children's bedroom. He ignored the kids bedrooms, he didn't hurt kids in anyway, and walked into Hasan king sized room. He whipped out his knife and slashed the fine lace bed covers and pillow. He then went over to the cupboard. He opened it and saw the safe. He knew the code though, he had watched Hasan put his PIN into an ATM at one point and was almost positive they were the same. He put it in and the safe clicked open. Satisfied he began to take the contents. Money, and lots of it and credit cards. Also he found a gun. He picked it hup, it was a beauty. He pocketed it and put the money in his backpack.

He continued smashing up the house until nothing was left untouched, except the kids bedrooms and toy room. Quickly, he pressed a note up against Hasan's front door and then charged to his car. He got in and drove off.

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Neal Hasan had returned from his holiday and was pulling up to his house. He got out and walked to his front door. He noticed something on the door, probably a note from the neighbour he thought. He continued walking up the path towards his door and suddenly he saw what it said on the door. He could feel himself losing conscious. The darkness closed in as he collapsed to the ground. The Shade had been in his house. He let the darkness take him as he lost conscious.

Verdinho's avatar Group Verdinho
10 yearsEdited
Good moves by the Shade! A seasoned Pro!!! Oreo's in the bag & he wins at life :P
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2013-08-19 21:29#129560 P-KIDDY : Good moves by the Shade BUT... He didn't empty the fridge. I can't hide my disappointment. The Oreo's were right there!!! :P In all seriousness, great update :)

Hahah, I will edit that in!
Ooh nice update, the Shade is really full of hate :P And poor Neal, not that the Shade cares
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